Describe a crowded place you’ve been to. You should say:
when you went there
where the place was
who you went there with
and explain how you felt about the place.
I'm going to talk about a crowded place I've been to. It was a local traditional market in Bangkok.
這句雖無文法錯誤,但照搬題目的用字,形同第一句就放棄在詞彙資源和語法多樣性拿分的機會。
A lot of bustling places I've visited don't stay in my memory, but a local traditional market in Bangkok is very different.
這句運用【對比】引起聽者興趣,暗示這個地方的特別性,比版本1A更吸引人、更有個人風格。
I'd like to introduce a very crowded place I've been to. It was a local traditional market in Bangkok and I went there with my family last summer.
這句雖無文法錯誤,但直接複製貼上題目的用詞,形同第一句就放棄在詞彙資源和語法多樣性拿分的機會。
Among the numerous busy venues throughout my sightseeing trips, a local traditional market in Bangkok remains vivid in my memory.
這句表達方式比版本2A更加成熟、自然且多樣化,能夠在開場就向考官展示考生具備較高的英語能力